Write On! Finding Characters

Write On! Finding Characters
by author Vivian Zabel, Stolen

A story or novel must have characters, but where does a writer find unique characters who can bring writing to life?

Characters are everywhere!

Recently I read a discussion about the difficulty in finding and developing characters in writing. I had to laugh because I nearly fall over characters begging to be included in stories and books, even if they don’t realize it.

After spending nearly a month in a facility that includes rehab, which I needed after surgery, I have a list of characters that can be used in various ways. All I had to do was jot down some details to use later.

This facility as four halls and cares for residents who need skilled nursing, rehab, and special care, as well as those who live there permanently, because they can’t live on their own. The list includes those like me who are here for rehabilitation due to injury, surgery, or stroke to those who can’t remember who they are or where they are. Allow me to share some “characters” that may well appear in one of my writings some day.

An example of courage and determination is a man I’ll call BJ. The bear of a man, recovering from a stroke, has lived in the facility for more than three months. When I first arrived, he had made little to no visible progress in being able to talk or use correct words. His eyes, under bushy gray brows, appeared lost and confused. In therapy, he struggled to find words that he knew he should know. No matter how discouraged he may be, he kept trying and trying and trying. His delight, when shown a pen, at being able to say “Pen” caused a smile to crease his face. Lifting a foot an inch off the floor became a major achievement.

Humor can be found, too. One resident has Alzheimer’s. A force to be reckoned with, 95-year-old “Granny” covered more ground faster with her walker than most nimble young people can running. However, she pulled some frustrating, yet so funny, stunts. One day, she kept walking off without her walker and had to be reminded to get it. I’d witnessed two incidents earlier in the day, and as I returned to my room after a walk, “Granny” came out of her room without her walker.

I asked, “Where’s your walker?”

“I don’t know” was the response.

“Go back in your room and get your walker.”

She turned around and entered the room, muttering all the time. In seconds she was back in the hall with her walker. She walked up to me and said, “She told me to go get my walker. She made me go back in my room to get my walker.” I struggled to keep from laughing as she fast-walked away from me. She hadn’t remembered I was the one who told her.

A nurse asked if they could hire me, but I refused. No way could I survive keeping up with “Granny.”

My advice for finding characters is to look around. Notice the people you see and hear. Keep notes. Then, when the occasion arises, insert them in your writings. A very vocal, destructive youth baseball coach ended up in one of my books. Of course he was one of the “bad” guys.

Look, watch, listen for characters you can use in your writing.

What characters have you encountered lately? Please comment below.

Vivian Zabel has won several awards with her writing, including first place with her mystery/suspense Midnight Hours, and has written in the adult, young adult, and children’s genres. Her latest novel Stolen, about a women who is battered and torn when her children are abducted, was just released. She taught English and writing for nearly 30 years, and edited newspapers, yearbooks, and literary magazines sporadically for 45. Zabel’s publishing company—4RV Publishing has released nearly 30 books in the last two years. For more on Zabel, read the Write On! Q&A.